I really like the plot of this story and look forward to seeing what happens next.With that said, there were a great deal of issues with sentence structure, verbiage and just overall editing. It made reading the dialogue tough at times. The characters weren't very likable and at times I wanted to just shake all of them. The story was intersting and held my attention throughout but I thought the story got truly interesting toward the end with the introduction of Oliver. To hear his background in conjunction with Adrian's was important and I think it helped Ria understand what she was facing. As always, I somewhat despise cliffhangers as I have very little patience to wait for the next book to come out a year later. I think there is a uniqueness to this story and it will be interesting to pick up the next book and see what happens.
